This has such a fun, mischievous charm to it. The playful twist on the “crazy cat lady” idea gives the whole poem a wink, and the image of rats cruising around in a little car is just delightfully unexpected. It feels whimsical and silly in the best way. Thanks for the giggles. I needed the lift!
A lady of rats—now that’s quite a feat,
Letting whiskered chauffeurs cruise down every street.
While cat ladies cuddle their kittens at home,
This bold little crew takes the highway to roam.
So tip your hat kindly, and don’t look displeased—
For the queen of the road is the real big cheese!
This has such a fun, mischievous charm to it. The playful twist on the “crazy cat lady” idea gives the whole poem a wink, and the image of rats cruising around in a little car is just delightfully unexpected. It feels whimsical and silly in the best way. Thanks for the giggles. I needed the lift!
A lady of rats—now that’s quite a feat,
Letting whiskered chauffeurs cruise down every street.
While cat ladies cuddle their kittens at home,
This bold little crew takes the highway to roam.
So tip your hat kindly, and don’t look displeased—
For the queen of the road is the real big cheese!
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great! keep going! more verses, please
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Oh rats I’ve ran out of rhyme! Haha thank you so much, pjgrieco.
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Your poems bring a smile to my face.
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And your smile lights up the day!
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Applause from an original cat lady who is definitely no “big cheese”.
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Rats with wheels, drive off into the sunset.
Thank you, Rae!
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Brilliant!
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Rats with wheels cruising the boulevard.
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Too funny!
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The Ratmobile driving down the highway.
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Cute!
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Thank you, Dawn!
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Thanks for this whimsical piece. It made me chuckle and I’m still smiling.
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Love to make you laugh. Thanks DD!
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A RatMobile, …😉
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Cheesy. 😉
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Rat car!
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Cruising thru town.
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