Read the Shel Silverstein comment. Reminds me more of Piet Hein: http://www.archimedes-lab.org/grooks.html
ON PROBLEMS
Our choicest plans
have fallen through,
our airiest castles
tumbled over,
because of lines
we neatly drew
and later neatly
stumbled over.
You are very welcome. I hope you find its simplicity meaningful and are able to share with others. I am much obliged for your kind review of my rhymes and reasons.
😂 Good one!
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Can’t help falling for it.
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Read the Shel Silverstein comment. Reminds me more of Piet Hein: http://www.archimedes-lab.org/grooks.html
ON PROBLEMS
Our choicest plans
have fallen through,
our airiest castles
tumbled over,
because of lines
we neatly drew
and later neatly
stumbled over.
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This is great! Thank you for the link. I can’t wait to read more.
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Hilarious. I received the book and can’t wait to read it.
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You are very welcome. I hope you find its simplicity meaningful and are able to share with others. I am much obliged for your kind review of my rhymes and reasons.
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“It’s a bird”.
“It’s a plane”!
“It’s…..” 😯
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Just me!
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Great poems and art work! Reminds me of Shell Silverstein!
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Thank you! Silverstein is a huge influence. Roald Dahl too.
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hahahahahahahaha 😀
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Thank you for the laugh Sir Charles. Keep poeting!
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No doubt that I will man!
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Hah, this is good!
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Thank you Ink!
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My pleasure Richard!
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I love this piece…. delightful!! 🙂
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Thank you Monica.
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Wonderful observations and thoughts on the current trend of priorities. Funny but sadly close to the truth.
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Agreed. Thank you!
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This is so great. I love it. Is this artwork made by you? I’m also an artist, I have some pieces on my blog
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Thank you Scarlettcatt. Yes, the artwork is me too. There is a signature hidden in every piece. I like your art too.
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You’re welcome and thank you 🙂 ❤
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Haha! A good one 😁
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
OOPS!
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Right??!?
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Can’t figure it out—sorry! Can’t find my comment this refers too!
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No worries-Was a comment Oops! And a reblog.
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Okay Whew. 🙂
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LOL. Gotta love those lists! There’s always ONE thing missing 😉
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Yes there is!
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Wow 😮
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Right?!?? There’s always something forgotten.
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LOL! Love this 😊
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Thank you J!
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Oh lord!
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Hahaha!
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Clever! People indeed ARE always worried about lesser important things.
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Indeed they are.
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😀
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Love it!
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Thank you!
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