Great piece. Playful and yet describing something transcendent, just out of reach. The dashes and word repetition between line endings and beginnings works for me. It’s halting, but it makes me reset and listen more closely, as the poem states.
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I was quite impressed by your post. It has given a new point of view.
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Wild Like the Flowers 
Great piece. Playful and yet describing something transcendent, just out of reach. The dashes and word repetition between line endings and beginnings works for me. It’s halting, but it makes me reset and listen more closely, as the poem states.
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Dear R T
5279 subscribers! I will die much before that
I was quite impressed by your post. It has given a new point of view.
Thanks for liking my post, ‘Supreme’ 🙏
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A gentle lullaby.
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This is very nice. I really like the animation, it’s quite sharp.
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